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The Strange One
I appearance differently now
My nickname still
The Strange
but now its new
they all whisper
The Strange One
I've change quite  a lot
Everyone doesn't pay attention
to me
mostly i appear randomly
like a ghost
Hiding in the crowd
just walking
through my own path
to the darkness
where I hide
in my spare time
Kinda like a vampire
almost vladmiri Tod
Always in dark clothing
being a vampire
and hiding away in the dark
Call the Goth boy
or vampire kid
I look at them
stare at them cold
Telling them to back off
I walk off
being the strange one
which people whisper
to each other
I'm not noticeable
to others
which is good
because scaring them
is nice
and surprising them too
Later on
At the park
reading a book
someone sits down
look up
Its vladmiri Tod
giving me a warm smile
call me
The Strange One
I call him
The Goth boy
Emos and Goths
get along well
look out for each other
I'm both
Emo and Goth
even strange
in some ways
One of my friends
still calls me
The Strange
as others call me
The Strange One
I'm a strange person
with mysterious appearance
to everyone
I'm the strange one
The Strange One
Another random poem I made up ^^. Enjoy :D more poems coming. Its the week off because of thanksgiving XD lo. So new poems :D. :happybounce: :happybounce: :squee: :squee: :la: :la: :la: :la: :squee: :squee:

ps. The pics i put for my poems aren't mine.

pss. I only own the poems.

I use pics to match the story of my poems but I would NEVER steal someone else's work. This pic isn't mine. Only the poem belongs to me

The art work of the drawing belongs to asuka111. ^^ Go check her artwork :) :iconasuka111:
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iotaku96 Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww! Your poem is so pretty! I love it!
great job! I also love the pic, it fits!^^
I love your poem, so very much, but I would kindly advise you to give proper credit to =asuka111 for her artwork. I gladly appreciate the fact that you did mention that the artwork did not belong to you, but giving proper credit to where it belongs would be best!
scareygirl15 Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ok i will ^^ thanks and i've been looking for the one who drew the artwork all this time before i put my poem :/ so yea thanks for finding the artist
No problem! c:
scareygirl15 Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ran-Zu Nov 20, 2012   Digital Artist
this is from :iconasuka111:

heres the original artwork [link]

pls do credit the artist. thanks!
scareygirl15 Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
i will
Ran-Zu Nov 21, 2012   Digital Artist
scareygirl15 Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
kitteh303 Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for mentioning that it isn't your work (the picture) but you might want to look into who the artist is and credit them directly (if you haven't already). Cheers!
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