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The Dust of the Past
My friend
is going through
Some tough times
I can relate to that
Hope he's doing ok
He's not dust
Not a heartless
No monster
I know life
has some difficult parts in life
Some people will relate
to the same pain
I was in that spotlight
of the awful thing
in life
His wounds will heal
that hole
will disappear
for good
The darkness is in him
surrounds the light away
Just like sasuke
Inner person
of himself
His pain is hurting him
crying inside
for help
I can see it
Thats where i was
crying in the dark alone
no one there
not caring of me
avoiding my pain
It's so sad
I hug him
so tight
letting him cry
All the pain
he holds in him
His cries
are his dust
to his past
The Dust of the Past
He's nobody
not a thing
or Monster
He's human
No dust
of the wind
or avoid from Life
I'm here
I have a shoulder
to share with
to let him cry
his pain
on me
I'll be there
For him
He's a good friend
of mine
No one should go through tough times
Not become the dust
of their own life
Throw it out
All the pain
Watch it
Become the dust of the past life
The Dust Of the Past
Enjoy my poem ^^. The Pic isn't mine I'll give credit to whoever drew this.

Ps. Working on my finals and done with my english final ^^.

Government already in progress too.

Wish me luck on Finals :D

:la: :la: :la: ^^ :nuu: :nuu: :nuu: :nuu: FINALS ARE SO DAM F*CKEN STRESSFULL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :nuu: :nuu:


This poem is for one of my good friends :iconjoshsasuke: hes going through alot right now and I wrote this for him to cheer up a bit. I hope it helps and I send you alot of hugs my dear buddy good friend of mine. STAY STRONG!!!!!!! life will get better dude!!!!! :la: :la: :la: :la:
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i-t-s-everything Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist
This made me think back to when i helped my best friend out, dealing with the hardest time of his life (i think). Really beautiful written, please keep up the good work.
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thankyou ^^ feel free to add me as a watch i have alot of poems in my gallery :) mostly in my poetry folder too ^^
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i-t-s-everything Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist
No worries ;3
Oh cool, maybe i will ; )
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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gaarafan103 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
It's sad but beautiful at the same time ,very nice work.

--
"In the dark but I see the light."
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks you ^^
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gaarafan103 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Welcome^^
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DirtyJokerz Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student General Artist
fuck stop it already.... I'd so tired of depressing things... I just cant get why i'm so sad and now I see tons of things like this T.T
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^" well i've been inthe spotlight before :) it was not good :(
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THEAIMANDPS Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BEAUTIFUL!
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thx!!!!!!! :D
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THEAIMANDPS Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
no prob :)
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:)
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) XD
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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eternalobserver Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Impressive! Very moving! Oh, and, Good Luck on your finals! :D
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thx
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Remusmdh Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Young lady, I too, like your friend, am in a dark place. For many years I have been. A place of pain and inner suffering no outside voices reach usually, but The Forgotten Kingdom and your poem reached it tonight.

Thank you ^^
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:) add me as a watch i have ALOT of poems XD
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Xx-White-Angel-xX Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Writer
Lovely poem and picture. They go hand in hand well together. :)
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks ^^
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nikkytae Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
the art looks like coffee-kizoku, but i'm not really sure lol
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ha! XD the art drawing is not mine and i give credit to whoever drew so yea I only own the poem not the pic still imporving in my art skills XD
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nikkytae Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
haha, good luck.
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks :)
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Blindseer95 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Who drew it?
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have no idea o.o but if you willing to find the person who did the drawing I'll happy to give credit to the artist ^^
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Blindseer95 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Since you posted it, I think it's your responsibility... Make a note in your artist's comments for the poem that it isn't your picture and you don't know the artist.
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ok thankyou ^^
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Blindseer95 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
no problem :)
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
^^
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Sarahsmileyface Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What a great poem, really awesome ^w^!! It really touched me♥
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scareygirl15 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thx
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